very very good
I've gotta say, you did extremely well while using a simplistic theme. Keep up the good work
Thanks a bunch!
Im hoping to do something alot more technical in my next flash. So yeah, keep an eye out for it and thanks alot for your review. :)
i had a bit of a chuckle at it, but other than that not even close to being good, try to be funnier next time
not too shabby
the game wasnt incredibly interesting at first, and there were a few times when a black star would come and kill me before i got a chance to move. it seems like a classic internet game, not bad, but not amazing
why o why did you have to use synths?
I'd have definatly used an orchestra or an organ myself, but thats what makes this piece yours. The intro got kinda touchy with some dissonant notes and chords, you used them pretty well from the sound of it, but sometimes its better to just change the note thats causing the dissonance. Some syncopation wouldve also really brought out the sections
I have such a soft spot for synth hahaha
I don't know why, but something in me was saying,"you know what this needs? SOME FUCKIN SYNTH MAN!" lol
its just how I roll xD
but in all seriousness, Im glad you liked it and thanks for the review.
The constructive criticism really helps me to improve, so thanks :D
you should know that i rarely give out 10/10 and 5/5, so trust me when i say im not bullshitting on how much i like this song. Good use of hitting the tonic a beat before the measure ends, thats definatly a technique most people, including myself, cant pull off. Btw, was this in G minor? I'm just going off relative tuning, I dont have a piano or anything near me, but if I'm right, ill be pretty happy with myself.
Wow... Thank you sooo much for those nice words. I was really down on myself because I thought no one was enjoying it.
And about the G minor.. I don't know haha
It may seem weird, but I have no knowledge of A, B, G- whatever, I just never got the opportunity to study it. So I'll just say you're right :D
Thank you again for this review, it took a little weight of my chest :D
the syncopation seemed a bit off sometimes, but other than that u did a nice job thinking outside the box with the distortion/ melody form definatly a direction you have alot of talent in, keep it up
I had that melody stuck in my head for weeks and then something (finally) clicked.
Glad you liked and thanks for reviewing again :D
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